Puff away pain :: Shit I’ve written

I was feeling bored so was reading other people’s blogs. While reading Abhijan’s blog, I came across this post. I quite liked it. Suddenly I decided to write something similar. But I did not want to make it a blog post. Then I remembered my deviantART account. So I fired it up and wrote a lot.

Here it is

I must say, it is a departure from my usual style (If I have one). Also, I’m modestly proud of it. Also, It’s completely fictional.

Do tell me what you think of it. πŸ™‚

15 Responses to “Puff away pain :: Shit I’ve written”

  1. parvathy Says:

    its actually good !! original piece ??

  2. shreya Says:

    really liked it,although this really isnt the way you usually write…..very nicely expressed πŸ™‚

  3. neelakantankk Says:

    @parvathy, Inspired from Abhijan’s post certainly, but the writing is all mine.

    @Shreya, Thank you. And yes this isn’t the way I usually write. Exam-induced madness I suppose. πŸ˜‰

  4. thesoliloquist Says:

    can this be called the beginning of a new Resolution??
    you know weak-minded people and all that…

    but really liked it. very crisp. lovely.

  5. neelakantankk Says:

    Fiction, remember? πŸ˜‰

  6. neelakantankk Says:

    Heh Heh. πŸ™‚

    And thanks for the compliments πŸ™‚

  7. Rukmini Says:

    Whoa.

    And why must you keep harping on the “It’s purely fictional” jazz? Whatever the source of inspiration may be, it’s beautifully written. Well done! πŸ™‚

  8. thesoliloquist Says:

    what’s your gmail Id? or whatever Id it i that you blog with?

  9. neelakantankk Says:

    @Rukmini, Heh Heh, Thankoo

  10. kaustav Says:

    Dude…… Thats very well written. Par tere isshtyle se hatke… Brilliantly done.
    That reminds me… mail me your contact no. (if you do have one now)

  11. Abhijan Says:

    Neelu,
    mate im absolutely honoured that my post could inspire such a brilliant piece.
    nice work
    πŸ™‚

  12. neelakantankk Says:

    @Kaustav, will do so. And Yes, different from usual. Thanks. :

    @abhijan, Ah. Thank You. 😎


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